Wow I like this man, good work, you did really well with the stock images, and combining them all. Maybe tone the lips down a bit, I dunno, its really not a big deal, but I like this one. Oh crop the right and bottom the extra black out, or did you intentionally want to keep the black?
Happy Thanksgiving! Now that I look at it again the lips are fine, before I was thinking they bothered me but not I think they are fine. But maybe the black border bothers me the most. If you exclude the black border it makes it more about the piece then the border that distracts me from the piece, it feels unnecessary. I dunno... just me.