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Screwing around with manipulation. Kinda supposed to be a mermaid type thingy. :P All stock other than the base are mine. Enjoy. ;)

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EDIT: Added more droplets and changed eye color.
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~amberghosh Jul 23, 2009  Hobbyist Photographer
Congrats! This deviation has been featured in my journal! [link]
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~Findae Jul 24, 2009  Professional Photographer
Thanks. :hug:
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~bradley-austin Nov 7, 2008  Professional Photographer
Good experimentation, I haven't done any fantasy like artwork yet. Kudoos man keep it up, I haven't done anything like this so I don't think its fair for me to point out anything to critique.
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~Findae Nov 7, 2008  Professional Photographer
Thanks. :D
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~abuseofreason Nov 6, 2008  Professional Digital Artist
Ooh! Pretty!

Since you put "Advanced Critique" I'll just point out a few things:

* The water droplets look as if they're going into her skin, rather than sitting atop them. (Only a couple are doing this, the larger ones). I would suggest reversing the bevel, if that's how you accomplished the effect, or checking out some of the great water drop brushes DA offers.
* It would make her eyes stand out more if you used the burn tool on her eyelashes to darken them. They are SO pretty.

That's pretty much it! I love her eyes.
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~Findae Nov 6, 2008  Professional Photographer
Ahah, I figured out what the problem is with the droplets. The light source was coming from the left on the photo of her eyes, and from the bottom right in the droplets photo. I'll try rotating the droplet layer to match the original photo.
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~abuseofreason Nov 6, 2008  Professional Digital Artist
There ya go!

One thing that helps me find errors: when you're done, flatten the piece and then reverse the view (like mirror-image). Often, when you've been staring at it for so long, it makes it hard to see errors and flaws. When you mirror-image it, a lot of those lighting things and other small flaws stand out much more. Also I cannot stress the importance of taking breaks if your work takes a long time. You've gotta give your eyes time to relax in order to find those quirky little mess-ups.
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~Findae Nov 6, 2008  Professional Photographer
Hmmm, great idea! I will definitely try that. My big problem now is that I made a mistake that I haven't made in a long time. I forgot to save the file as a tiff with full layers, so now all I have is the flattened version. So, I either rework the jpg (lowering quality, etc) or creating the whole thing again. At least it will be faster the second time. :XD:
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~abuseofreason Nov 6, 2008  Professional Digital Artist
Ugh I HATE IT when that happens! Stupid Photoshop!
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~Findae Nov 6, 2008  Professional Photographer
Yeah, I was just wishing it saved things automatically. Just finished the new one, though, and it only took me like 10 minutes. I'm not entirely happy with it, but it'll do. :P
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