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Taken at Manito (sp?) park in Spokane, WA. Enjoy. ;)

Found the source file. Now available as a print. :D

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:iconking-rastel:
Here is the constructive critique you wanted:

Not to bad of a macro shot. Personally I am not a big fan of them because most of the time they look the same in some way or another. You boarder a little on that edge IMO however with the monochromatic tone and the high contrast makes up for that. The focus is very appealing with both sharp and soft focuses going on at the same time. forget the term at the moment, it's late for me right now.

Nice piece.

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:iconfindae:
Thank you very much. :D

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:iconfrances23:
This is really beautiful :)

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:iconfindae:
Thanks. :D

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The whole earth is the tomb of heroic men, and their story is not graven only on stone over their clay, but abides everywhere-without visible symbol-woven into the stuff of other men's lives.
:iconedthehobbit:
This is lovely, I can't really say what could be better. If you really want to give this a glossy finish, try adding a border/matte.
:iconpurplecupcakes:
Its beautiful. =)

I would give you critique, but I'm just starting to get into photography myself, so I wouldn't be able to say anything helpful.

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:iconfindae:
There is no critique that is not helpful, even from an inexperience eye. ;)

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The whole earth is the tomb of heroic men, and their story is not graven only on stone over their clay, but abides everywhere-without visible symbol-woven into the stuff of other men's lives.
:iconfindae:
It does have a border, though it's a bit hard to see against DA's default background. :P

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The whole earth is the tomb of heroic men, and their story is not graven only on stone over their clay, but abides everywhere-without visible symbol-woven into the stuff of other men's lives.
:iconfindae:
Anyone else seeing,

XDD Ese grupo que canta "Barby Girl"?
LOL Es un buen grupo XDDD Es geniaaaaaal o3o

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Thanks to =FantasyStockAvatars for the avvie! =D :boogie: :heart:

in this post? Is this a leftover april fools from DA, or what?

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:iconmeanjoe:
you have a feature at this hook [link]

plz fave it so ur work get more exposure and try make ur friends fav it!!

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June 29, 2008
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NIKON CORPORATION
NIKON D200
1/45 second
F/5.6
200 mm
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Apr 24, 2005, 5:29:55 PM

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